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Flyer 1:
1) Has good hierarchy. Our eyes immediately go to the 50% off as it is the largest shape. It has good use of color without feeling too overwhelming. It also has good balance.
2)The sign the kid is holding seems weird. It feels like its floating since its the same color as the background.
Flyer 2:
1) It has a nice balance of color between blue and white with some accents.
2) It feels cluttered. The placement of the recycling icon and the bird and tagline feel unnecessary or out of place. The cloud is dripping? There are butterflies and circles as little design elements that make the overall flyer feel all over the place. Too much information is contained in one box, specifically the bottom one. It also blends in with the cloud so there's a clash. We suggest less use of clipart.
Flyer 3:
1) Color use is good and is repeated nicely throughout the flyer. They did a good job isolating the contact information. Bullet points are creative.
2) There is too much use of the crescent shape. They can replace it with circle shapes and/or outlines. The picture of the people should be a bit smaller so we could focus more on the information.
Flyer 4:
1) Their use of space is good. The QR code is a nice touch.
2) Colors are all over the place. The Call Us text should go with the address and details at the bottom. Pictures should be smaller. The Best Creative Education could go on the other side. Being on the right feels repetitive with the other phrase using education. The recycling icon should be moved somewhere else, probably on the bottom. The social media icons are useless without providing a handle to search for.
Flyer 5:
1) The gradient is nice. The blue and white are good colors as an overall flyer.
2) There is too much shapes, different colors, and different patterns going on in the center of the flyer. There should be more contact information as well as general information about the workshop.
Flyer 6:
1) Good color and hierarchy that clearly communicates what the poster is for. Theme is cohesive. Hearts also fit with the theme of Valentine's. Good placement of text.
2) Social Media or contact information could be included. An address should be included.
Flyer 7:
1) Nice graphics with good utilization of text inside. Good spacing between each text box.
2) Create your own pizza should have a bigger section. Information should have better hierarchy.
3)
I would you use the hierarchy repeated throughout the flyers.
I really enjoy the balance within the images and how it makes the viewers eyes move around the page, and so I would like to try to achieve that in my own work.
I enjoy the color and hierarchy uses for most of the flyers.
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